Monday, 14 July 2008

Weekend Wordsmith--prompt 'Crowded'

She dreams of colours,
primary colours,
dancing,
laughing, singing,
alive.
She dreams of crowds,
sweaty,
heaving, loving,
alive.
She dreams of senses,
delicate, spicy,
perfumed.
Alive.
She dreams.

3 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

I like the simplicity of this and the short lines add to it.

one more believer said...

it's all about movement being alive... w/few words.. gotta have dreams excellent piece!

Michelle said...

Loved this! Thanks!