Chilling! Like a dark fairytale. Love it.
Ooooh!! It does sound like a dark, mysterious fairytale and I love it, too!! Terrific take on the pic of the day! Hope you have a wonderful week!Sylvia
the fairies will do that ~ get you every time but fun will be had with leaves kicking fall ~ great take ~ Lib
Very well written. Makes you want to hear more, which any good story should do.
Evocative, sad, poignant. Excellent poetic writing!
Excellent MF! It hints at magic and faeries and something perhaps sinister. Very evocative.
This does seem mystical and fairy like. Wonderfully done :)
Beautiful and scary at the same time.... :O)
I particularly like the "come away into the dance" line. A gorgeously eerie poem.Have a great week.
Hmmm, has a haunting song like quality to it.
Maybe there's nothing dark - maybe it's just a girl allowing nature to heal.
Excellent poem-sad as well...
Very dark...just my kind of story. Loved it!Have a great week. Cheers.
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