To the point!blown away
I can sense the scale of the migration, when you say 'like clouds'. I see an expanse that fills the sky.
A wonderfully poetic description of what birds do in the fall.
Since I love birds, this poem really appeals to me. What a nice analogy. Well done!
Makes me think of the Canada geese I love so much. Thanks for this and for participating in OSI.
lovely, the idea of birds suspended in the sky...
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