tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8995895871926337747.post4911077192708571823..comments2023-05-26T05:08:00.708-07:00Comments on Away With the Faeries: For Fiction friday, 3WW, and Sunday ScribblingsLenorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00438831003220950550noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8995895871926337747.post-40760248054355700472008-08-05T19:25:00.000-07:002008-08-05T19:25:00.000-07:00Wonderfully written!!! You bring a nice flavour to...Wonderfully written!!! You bring a nice flavour to the character. The stucatto writing does well to bring the energy up, giving me a feeling that your character is frantic in her energy about her passion for gambling and the races. I can just picture her walking through the racing lobbies in high heels, short, quick steps, focused on her racing form...brilliant!<BR/><BR/>I'm a little late posting my Friday Challenge...I invite you to come by for a comment. :D<BR/><BR/>That's my two pence...<BR/>Arial ;)<BR/><BR/>Arial Burnz - Romance Novelist & Artist<BR/>http://arialburnz.wordpress.com<BR/>www.EnchantedWoodz.com<BR/>www.EnchantedWoodz.com/arialburnzAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8995895871926337747.post-41805916735467205642008-08-05T09:48:00.000-07:002008-08-05T09:48:00.000-07:00I really enjoyed this story. You set the scene and...I really enjoyed this story. You set the scene and made us feel like we know her.<BR/><BR/>P.S. That pic of your son and his Aunt cracks me up :) My niece and nephew love to tug on my hair as well, so I feel her pain.TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8995895871926337747.post-52510679270659959412008-08-05T06:49:00.000-07:002008-08-05T06:49:00.000-07:00This needs another part. Very well written.Creativ...This needs another part. Very well written.<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/07/creativity.html" REL="nofollow">Creativity</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8995895871926337747.post-87680151339774657612008-08-02T13:59:00.000-07:002008-08-02T13:59:00.000-07:00To be honest, she was only made up for this writin...To be honest, she was only made up for this writing prompt, for the leopard dress one in particular. She's a mix of a real lady who was always at Saratoga every year for almost 10 years that my dad and I went when I was a teenager, who always dressed exactly as she wanted. And back then the track and where we always sat was full of men who's only interrest was betting. The other mix is more a tribute to my 4 month old son's infatuation with Serena Williams.<BR/><BR/>Thanks everyone for the kind words. :)Lenorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00438831003220950550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8995895871926337747.post-25955720962337243062008-08-02T11:25:00.000-07:002008-08-02T11:25:00.000-07:00What a delightful person - I envy her. Nicely writ...What a delightful person - I envy her. Nicely written.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8995895871926337747.post-40893321624459876672008-08-02T06:13:00.000-07:002008-08-02T06:13:00.000-07:00You evoke a wonderful array of images ... a guess ...You evoke a wonderful array of images ... a guess there are few of us in the world who would not have been to the races at least once in our lives.<BR/><BR/>I really liked this and was particularly interested because you commented that it was based on a real person. I'm big on women being feminine in a man's world ... and holding firm and proud that feminine grace.<BR/><BR/>I'd love to know more about her too.Jodi Cleghornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00808676742258881407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8995895871926337747.post-22209701325086780202008-08-01T20:51:00.000-07:002008-08-01T20:51:00.000-07:00Lovely insight into someone determined to be how s...Lovely insight into someone determined to be how she wishes to be ~ regardless!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8995895871926337747.post-3562430439844255262008-08-01T19:15:00.000-07:002008-08-01T19:15:00.000-07:00I especially enjoyed this one - went to saratoga w...I especially enjoyed this one - went to saratoga with my dad when I was not quite 10 years old with a trainer friend of his from brandywine stables. . . Serena is an interesting character. . . has she appeared in any of your other writing?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8995895871926337747.post-31242087498387518682008-08-01T13:10:00.000-07:002008-08-01T13:10:00.000-07:00Sounds like quite a girl! Oh - I won on the horses...Sounds like quite a girl! Oh - I won on the horses today! Really enjoyable read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com