Friday, 27 May 2011

Tornado

Standing naked before the storm
I could only stare at
the jumble that once been people's lives
and grin helplessly.

Death was quick.

3 comments:

Alice Audrey said...

Wow. Short and powerful. This could fit with a Sunday 160 too.

my three words
are in a longer thing.

mindlovemisery said...

Shocking and powerful! Great job!

Ena said...

There's something both haunting and powerful in these words. Thanks for sharing your flash fiction with us.